Stuck in Low Gear

I'm in the midst of writing the first draft of RIGHT SIZED , and feel like my writing progress has slowed to a crawl.

Fall is usually a busy time for me.  Plenty to do around the house -- boats removal and winterization, cold weather prep for the house, lots of kids sports activities.  I also doubled down this fall with a week-long hunting trip to the UP of Michigan, and soon another trip to Ethiopia.

The result is I don't have as much time as usual for writing.

Normally when I'm working on a first draft, the work progresses to a regular, predictable drumbeat.  I write every day, which allows me to pick up exactly where I left off.  This method is particularly efficient as I have to devote little time reminding myself what is happening to the story line.

During RIGHT SIZED, however, there have frequently been gaps of several days between work sessions.  While I think I'm as productive as normal once I eventually get back in the groove, it takes time to figure out exactly where I left off the last time I sat down at the computer.  Sometimes a lot of time.  In addition, RIGHT SIZED adds to this problem because of it's design. The novel has two distinct plots that run independently for much of the book.  The structure I've chosen to reveal the story is to explore those plots in alternating chapters.  That results in even more reviewing and more lost time (but also what is hopefully an enjoyable way to read the story.)

I look forward to the time when all the extracurricular activities die down a bit and I can jump back into a daily writing routine.

Upcoming Blog Changes

I currently write three blog posts a week, two (on Monday and Wednesday) for "Corporate Politics -- The Blog" and one here (Fridays, normally).  Unless I'm on vacation, then I have been skipping the posts.  I recently built an Index for posts on Corporate Politics, and was surprised to find there were almost 250 of them.

250 posts is a lot.  As I went back through the list, I noticed there was a bit of redundancy to them.  You see, the inspiration for more than half of these came from a book written by a friend of many years, John Samuels.  John published a book called "Lessons Learned the Hard Way" (you should probably buy a copy if you enjoy my Corporate Politics blog) earlier this year, and I was lucky enough to be a part of the editing process.  He kindly allowed me to put my own twist on his "lessons" providing me with a road map for blogging for almost two years.

That road is just about to come to an end.

On Monday, I posted the book's "Lessons...."  I have a few Lessons I missed over the last two years (5 to be precise), but once those are finished, I will have to move on to other subject matter.

Finding fresh business perspectives to comment on is hard work -- particularly if you're trying to avoid lots of redundancy.

In the midst of this lack of inspiration, I'm finding some of my oldest posts are the most popular -- specifically ones related to "Behaviors bosses hate in their subordinates" and "Boss types that drive subordinates crazy."

So here is my plan starting with the final "Lessons..." posts (in approximately 3 weeks):  I will switch my Monday posts to a "Classic" format.  I'll start by reintroducing each of the posts in the above two series.  Of course, they'll get a facelift and a re-edit.  In some cases, I'll add content  to further flesh out the ideas.  These posts will be identified as "Classics" in the description lines.

Wednesday posts will continue to be entirely new content.

The Friday Writing Journal posts at this point will not change (until I start to run out of ideas for them, too!)

I am a Comma Dunce

I received my final proofreading copy of Empowered early this week and because of the timing associated with the Pre-Release of the novel, I made all the corrections in three marathon editing sessions on Monday - Wednesday.  When you process a concentrated dose of corrections, it can look and feel different than working through a few pages each day.  During this session, I was faces with one clear conclusion that hadn't seemed quite so stark with my previous novels:

I am a Comma Dunce.

In fact, it appears that I've never met a comma I didn't like.  I literally spent hours removing commas from pretty much every conceivable comma-based error imaginable.  My biggest offense was adding commas to dependent clauses -- almost every one of them it would seem.

Truth be told, I've never paid too much attention to punctuation rules.  I simply dropped commas into the document where I would naturally pause if I was reading the text aloud.  Unfortunately, that's not how it should be done.

Over the past few days I've been reviewing the proper use of the comma.  While I might still occasionally violate the rules, I hope to get my draft manuscripts a bit closer to "correct."

How is that Pre-Order Program Going?

Someone asked me about my Pre-Order program this week, and I have to say that I have absolutely no idea how it is going.  There is no data that Amazon provides telling me if EMPOWERED has pre-sold a thousand copies or zero.

Which also leaves me in a quandary -- trying to decide how much promotion to do on the novel.  Do I inundate social media with "adver-posts," delivering a steady drum-beat of promotions and "advertising?"  Do I mention it only a few times?  Or should I just stay silent and hope people notice.

Getting this stuff right is critical.  Too much promotion and you alienate potential readers.  Too little and people aren't aware of your work at all.

Well, here's a start:

EMPOWERED will be released for sale on October 12th, 2014.  You can pre-order the Kindle version of the book now by clicking here.  A paperback version will be available shortly after October 12th and is not a part of the pre-order program.  Other ebook versions will come out in January.

Here's a description of the story:

Set in Indianapolis during a winter blizzard rivaling the storm that brought the city to its knees in 1978, EMPOWERED is a twist on the popular cable television series "Undercover Boss."

When Colin Jensen arrives as the newly minted President of TruePhase Instrument's Chemicals division, he hears stories of disengagement and supervisory excess from the shop floor.  What he finds there however, goes way beyond anything he could have imagined.

Working with Sandy Martin, a young financial analyst out to prove herself, Colin searches for the person behind the crime and thuggery in his Indianapolis factory.  When they begin to realize who might be responsible, both wish they'd never started looking.

Colin is faced with a series difficult choices, ones with implications for his career, family, future, and even his life. 

Finally, an Index!

Many of you know that this Writing Journal is not the only place I blog.  Twice a week (on most weeks) I write a post for "Corporate Politics -- the blog."  This series of articles is derived from my years of experience in senior management, and topics range from hiring, to corporate crime, to lawsuits, to political tactics.

The first posts were initially made on my personal blog back in March of 2010, and later transferred to this site once I had it up and running.  Since that time, I've added almost 250 posts to the series (you'd think I'd run out of things to say, but there's still a little gas in the tank).

A few months ago, a friend pointed out to me that finding material was practically impossible in "Corporate Politics -- the blog" for a couple of reasons.  First, because I've been devoted to clever turn-of-phrase type titles which often don't completely describe the subject matter.

And because there was no easy way to navigate the site.

Other than the last seven posts (which quite some time ago I started listing in each new piece) you were pretty much on your own trying to find anything.  A few weeks ago I added a search box to new posts to help readers find subject matter, but realistically, the blog was still very difficult to navigate.

Until now.

I spent the entire day Monday creating an Index for every post in the series.  The Index gives the article name, the date it was first published, and a short description of the subject.  It certainly seems like there should be a function that puts this together automatically, but alas, there is none that works with the template I use on this site (Drat).

Now you can scan the Index  for titles, dates, or subject matter.  It should make finding material a lot easier.

Click here and give it a look!

Another Month, Another First Draft

I love seeing projects progressing.  Last month I finished up a rather extensive rewrite of Supply Chain, and this month I'm going to reward myself with a First Draft (my favorite part of the writing process) of Right Sized.

The concept behind Right Sized is simple -- I start the story with an emotional firing of a seasoned company veteran by a young, ambitious manager, and then trace their lives afterward.

The company veteran (who already had some self-destructive habits and behaviors) crashes as a result of his termination.  His self-confidence destroyed, he descends into a hell of his own making, pushing aside everyone that tries to help him.

At the same time the young manager's career is propelled forward, not in small part due to the "decisive actions" taken with the company veteran and a few other employees.

Then a funny thing begins to happen.

As the veteran hits rock bottom he recognizes nobody is going to save him, and slowly begins putting his life back together one piece at a time.  The youthful wunderkind however, begins to find he's being outmaneuvered by a couple of corporate politicians that are far out of his league.

The story ends with confrontation between the two main protagonists with what I hope will be a surprise twist.

I love this stage of novel creation, even though it is probably the most challenging part of writing a book.  It's where the general concepts hit the reality of the page.  It's in this process that the characters really come to life and the story gets legs. 

Pre-Release Sales!

I finally got around to setting up Empowered on Amazon for Pre-Release sales.  That means that although the book won't be released until October 12th (picked that date as it is my birthday), you should be able to order it here in the next day or so  Empowered.

Here is the description:

"Colin Jensen has just hit the big time.  After a meteoric rise through the ranks at Danaher Corporation, he is just about to begin his first general management assignment as President of the Chemicals Division at Indianapolis's TruePhase Corporation.
His initial impressions are anything but positive.  Performance of the Chemicals Division mediocre, the staff is weak, morale is terrible, and the CEO appears to be simply marking time – virtually ordering Colin to "not touch anything” for fear he might mess things up.  The young division President soon finds himself wondering why he put his marriage and career at risk for an "opportunity" that is quickly devolving into something akin to a babysitting assignment.
Believing that life imitates art – or at least what passes for "art" in the realm of reality television – Colin disguises himself as an unskilled laborer and goes "Undercover Boss" in his own shipping department.
There he discovers conditions are far worse than he feared.  The shop floor is overseen by a short-tempered,  dictator, and is actually run by a handful of violent, intimidating thugs.
With the help of financial analyst Sandy Martin, Jensen begins digging into some of the suspicious behavior he observed on the shop floor.  Unfortunately, their blundering attempts to discover the truth tips off those responsible for the shop floor violence.  By the time Jensen and Martin realize their lives are at risk, Indianapolis is hit by a rare blizzard which creates its own set of unintended consequences.
Both Martin and Jensen are faced with increasingly terrible personal choices as the situation continues to escalate out of control.  The only question – will either of them survive?"

Asking For (and not Getting) Reviews

While I'm not sure exactly how Amazon ranks or suggest books to potential readers, I've been operating under the belief that reviews help.

Cover Image for Pursuing Other Opportunities.  Click on the image for more information.

Cover Image for Pursuing Other Opportunities.  Click on the image for more information.

To that end, I've asked people that I know (some friends, some acquaintances) to volunteer to read and review each of my novels as they were released.  On a positive note, I don't have trouble getting people to say yes -- on Pursuing Other Opportunities, my most recently released novel -- I had 48 people say they would do so.

Unfortunately, I've discovered there seems to be an ever-widening gap between good intentions and actual results.

I set a goal and a deadline -- get 20 reviews posted by July 1st.  As the request went out in mid-May, it seemed like a reasonable target.

Now I sit at the end of August with only 16 reviews.

And I'm asking myself what to do...

Do I pester the volunteers?  Ask them to get moving on that review?  Risk offending them?

Or do I just "get what I get and not throw a fit?"

Pre-Order Program

I perused an email this morning where Amazon will be allowing those authors that sign up for Kindle Direct to do pre-launch promotion and take advanced orders.

I think I'll give this a try with EMPOWERED, my next to release novel.  I can safely say that there will be a version ready to release in about three months, perfect timing to try out this program.

As far as I can see, the only downside is that the novel must be exclusive on Amazon for 6 months -- something I was already doing anyway in order to capitalize on countdown and free deals.

Below is the cover for EMPOWERED:


Back to the Computer

After the longest "quick read-through" in history, I'm finally entering my corrections into the computer.  I must admit that just carrying around a book and a pen (as opposed to a phone and a pen) was a lot easier than lugging my massive 17" laptop.  This computer, although it has a fantastic screen for editing, is one heavy beast when I need to take it with me.

Currently I'm only 10% of the way through putting the edits in the book.  Yeah, this is going to take a while....

Lengthy Editing

Over the course of the last four years, my writing has significantly improved.  When I glance at some of my early drafts from back then, there can be no doubt about it.

My first novel (which was eventually cleaned up with the help of an outside editor) was almost laughable in it's first incarnation.  How many times per paragraph was I using the word "that," for example?

Honestly though, the first draft of each novel probably hasn't improved tremendously over what I was able to produce back then.  It's the editing that's better.  I catch and fix the a myriad of errors during the editing process.

Which makes the first editing pass (the one immediately after writing the first draft) particularly burdensome.

Right now I'm trying to plow my way through "Supply Chain."  Been working on it for four weeks, in fact.  My normal procedure would be to do a fast read of the paper copy of the book, noting down the big picture items -- things like plot holes, unclear motivations, inconsistencies in a character's behavior, etc..  Then I would go through the detailed text line-by-line on my computer, taking out the spurious "that"s and the other obvious wording and grammar mistakes, along with other.  I never get them all, but can probably cull ninety percent at this stage (and introduce an additional ten percent in the process).

Unfortunately, I'm seeing too many errors in "Supply Chain" to use this method.  Instead, I'm bogged down in the paper copy, noting corrections to pretty much every sentence.  It looks like a pen exploded on each page!  This is effectively doubling the time it will take to complete the edit.  I realize this, but the glaring mistakes are so distracting that I just can't force my way through the draft without noting them.

Maybe it's time to revise my first draft editing method!

White Male Privilege

This is a bit off-topic today, but I had such a visceral reaction to the use of the term "White Male Privilege" this week that I simply can't let it alone.

The phrase was used repeatedly in a blog comment (not mine, another one I read), and the context of usage was to disdainfully dismiss the observations and opinions expressed in a particular opinion piece.  I was outraged because, as you already know if you've seen my picture, I'm a white male.

Further reading calmed me down and I began to ponder a bit on the subject of "White male privilege" (or WMP henceforth).  WMP is a particularly important subject to me as, in addition to being a white male, I have three children of color -- two daughters and a son, and all adopted from Ethiopia -- and while I'd like to think there is no such thing as WMP, I worry that it is in fact, alive and well and may have negative impacts on their lives.  After a few hours researching, and a few days pondering, I've come to the following conclusions:

  1. WMP does exist.  At least when we define it based on outcomes.  From a statistical standpoint whites and males definitely experience better economic outcomes in America than women or people from other ethnic groups.  An example of this is the often quoted "women earn $0.77 for every $1.00 earned by males."
  2. There can be little doubt that there was rampant discrimination against ethnic minorities and women in the not too distant past.  I can still recall overt racism and prejudice being expressed by people when I was a child.  I see scant evidence of it today, but that might be simply because it has been driven partially underground.  Or maybe I just travel in more enlightened circles.
  3. While I can't prove it, it seems to me that racism and discrimination have been greatly reduced since my youth (in the 1960's.)  While I suspect quite a few people still harbor prejudices in their hearts, it is now poorly tolerated in civil society.  There have also been many programs instituted by the government to help reduce the effects of WMP, things like affirmative action, desegregation, EEOC hiring and promotion practices, anti-discriminatory housing laws, and others I'm forgetting.  While these don't necessarily eliminate discriminatory practices, and sometimes they cause a backlash, it appears the programs have helped to level the playing field.
  4. Correlation, however, does not prove causality.  The question of the effect of WMP in today's society, is not as simple as pointing to inequality of outcomes and presenting that as proof.  Human beings are complicated creatures, and the trajectories of their lives are impacted by a great many factors beyond WMP.  For example, when I quoted the $0.77/$1.00 earnings number, that is a piece of raw data.  I understand that when factors such as years of experience and continuity of employment are "accounted for" (however that is done), the gap is much smaller.  The battle between correlation and causality seems always to lead to arcane mathematics.  Reminds me of the famous Mark Twain quote:  "There are lies, damned lies, and then there are statistics."
  5. From the perspective of a white male, I don't think we can detect when WMP might be operating in our favor.  It isn't obvious if it is giving us a leg up in some way.  In addition, human nature seems to dictate that we normally attribute positive life events to our own skills, brilliance, or abilities.  It works in the opposite way as well -- when something bad happens, we tend to blame outside forces (like WMP?).  What's really going on often requires a bit of sleuthing.  None of this means WMP isn't real, but it helps explain why its operation is so darned hard to detect.
  6. All this being said, I'm pretty optimistic about the future for my African-American children (and my other daughters, as well).  The playing field, while certainly not perfect, is probably the most "level" it has been in the history of our country.

This being said, I still have a bone to pick with the concept of WMP.  You see, while it represents a real problem (one that appears to have been partially beaten into submission), the phrase is used as a weapon in debate.  Here is what I mean....

If you're a white male and you are successful, someone is bound to say it is because of WMP.  The statement is demeaning in the extreme, and presupposes an understanding of a person's life that immediately discounts ability, talent and effort.  I promise that even with some unseen aid, most of us that have succeeded in life have had to work extremely hard to make it happen.  The WMP argument is an attempt to reduce a lifetime of struggle and effort to a mere statistical event.  The implication is that without WMP, none of our success would have occurred.

The truth is, few of us (if any) would recognize any overt assistance from WMP.  As for myself, I doubt it was a significant factor in my life's course.

So here's the bottom line -- White Male Privilege is still around, but it is rapidly becoming a thing of the past.  Its impact is hard to pinpoint, and most white males will not recognize its role (if any) in their successes.  So please don't demean us by trying to reduce our lives to a fancy, academic buzzword -- it's insulting in the extreme.

Summertime Slowdown

Ever since returning from vacation -- to a house that had been struck by lightning with many electronic items malfunctioning -- I've been stuck in low gear when it comes to writing.  And I'm in the midst of one of the easiest writing tasks right now, reading the first draft of Supply Chain.

Just can't seem to get in the groove presently.  Every time I turn around, there's something else that needs to be taken care of.

Maybe now that the 4th has come and gone, I'll find a way to turn things around. 

Signed Copies!

I'm not sure why it took me so long to realize I could do this, but this week I was able to figure out how to add a page to my website to make available signed copies of my books.  I was even able to put in a field for people to request special dedications.  You can see them here.

This all happens with a slight amount of hassle.  After all, I will have to select the book, sign it, and take it down to the post office to mail.  Since the copies are a bit more expensive than the Amazon price, however, (to cover shipping and packaging charges) I don't expect to be overwhelmed by requests.

In fact, no one has yet ordered one.

So if you read this post, decide this is absolutely something you would like to have, try to order and have any problems, then please email me at tspears62@gmail.com and let me know so I can fix it!

The Alternate Computer

While on vacation in Ethiopia, I couldn't bring myself to haul along my behemoth "laptop" (a huge Dell with a 17" screen -- the perfect tool for reviewing and inserting proofreading corrections, not to mention a number of other tasks).  The basic problem was (A.) the computer is really heavy, weighing in at a good four pounds, and (B.) my entire "life" is on that computer -- well, at least my writing life.  I didn't want to risk anything happening to it.

We have an old, old Dell Laptop that lives in our kitchen.  XP operating system old, if that gives you an idea.  It wouldn't stay charged, and had basically been abandoned for any purpose other than occasionally calling up a recipe.  But it was small -- as in 9" screen small.  So I decided to take it, figuring if something happened I wouldn't suffer a major loss.

My writing projects went on a memory stick, and I ordered a new battery for the tiny computer (a $25 expense).  When the time came, I packed up this little guy and away I went.

You know, it worked perfectly.  Despite the repeated warnings I received from Microsoft that the operating system was no longer supported.  Despite its age.  Despite the tiny screen .  I managed to nearly complete the editor's notes for Empowered while out of town.  I think this will become my travel computer from this point onward!

 

The Lull between

I'm in between projects presently, which always leaves me with an odd feeling.  I've finished the first draft of OUTSOURCED, and need to go back and complete edits for EMPOWERED.  As often happens after finishing a project I have a sense of restlessness, and at the same time I'm also reluctant to start something new.

So I'm busying myself with cleanup items.  Like recruiting reviewers for PURSUING OTHER OPPORTUNITIES, updating my profile on Amazon's Author Central, blog writing, and making sell sheets.

In this particular gap, my lull is also impacted by a pending vacation, which is producing a bunch of non-writing priorities and also leaving me wondering how I want to handle writing during the trip.

Well, maybe by this time next week I'll be delving into my next project.

When the Novel Almost Writes Itself

I'm nearing the end of the first draft of "Outsourced," the sequel to "Leverage" and "Pursuing Other Opportunities."  This is my favorite part of writing because it is when all the previously laid groundwork begins to pay off.

Thinking back to the original design documents for "Outsourced," I started with the broad strokes of where I wanted this final installment in the trilogy to go, but it was still took a lot of work to build the plot.  And it took even more work to develop the unique and interesting characters to fit into the storyline.   I would say I labored over the design documents for this novel more than most.

Then it was time to write the early part of the novel, starting with where the story initially grabs the reader, and proceeding to set up the story line through its series of struggles that the protagonists must endure.  I don't think I'm alone in saying that those first couple of chapters are just darned tough to get down on paper.

The middle tends to be bit easier, but there is still a need to be vigilant for and fight against something I think of as "story sag" where there are too many words spent on build up -- particularly when the destination is obvious to the reader.  Even though this part is easier than the beginning, it still feels like work.

The end of a novel, however, is where the story seems to take on a life of its own.  The words spring from the keyboard onto the page, and the story seems to write itself.  Everything I've put in place to make that happen comes together.  I think of it as the final pieces of a large and complex jigsaw puzzle being fit in place.  And just like when working a puzzle, I'm anxious to get to the end.  But I am also conscious that this is when I can begin to celebrate victory.

Of course, there are hundreds of hours of editing yet to go, but once the novel is created, it becomes something real and tangible.  It is the basic form of my literary sculpture, awaiting more detailed work with finer tools, yet already clearly demonstrating it's potential.

Well, enough of this musing!  Time to get back to "Outsourced" and its exciting conclusion!