Originally published 9/22/10
I just updated the first thirteen chapters of Incentivize to the second draft revision -- it should be much more readable, although not perfect.
Will try to get the next thirteen chapters posted by Monday of next week, and the balance by Friday.
As always, if you would like to read it, just send me an email at email@example.com asking for permission. The only thing I ask is that you offer some critique after you're done!